Well, pretty much what has already been said, needs to be longer. It sounds like a work half-done. I could understand if there were more elements going on like a blues guitar and bass, but it's just so minimal and not very memorable. Yes, the cheese factor is there, and yes, the vocals are great and punny, but it's just missing that next level that it needs with more elements to give this a more memorable sound. Not bad, but I know for a fact you can do much better. 3/5