Great concept and instrumentation was arranged well, but like the majority of the other songs, the meter and pitch destroyed the ability to listen and enjoy. I really dig the lyrics and guitar, but the vocals, percussion, and just about everything else needs work, so that it all flows together. You can definitely tell you were drunk when producing this. I've done that before thinking the track turned out amazing, which then when I listened to it sober, it was God-awful. You did accomplish the cheese factor, but I know you are fully capable of producing a much, much better track sober. 2.5/5